I’m just going to take a brief break from writing to leave this here.
I think the last frame needs a “now” at the end of that question.
Ugh, no way! It’d make the whole sentence way too clunky.
*hand twitches over revolver*
“Little did he know that Aaron had snuck in the night before, and emptied all the bullets out of his faithful old shooter.”
Argh must stop.
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